First Draft Feedback

This draft of our music video is our last until the finished product. We still have features we would like to add and in and enhance too finish it off, however we shared this with our peers and teachers and received feedback from them. From this we took on our feedback and have worked on the comments people have given us. 

Positives:

1. An effective transition is when  Sophie catches the hat from when Renae throws it up into the air. 
2. The use of balloons is consistent which portrays synergy throughout.
3. Framing of the shots are good and there is a variety. 

Negatives:

1. A lot of the lip sync is out and makes the video look disjointed.
2. Variation of shot transitions are not apparent. There needs to be more adventurous transitions rather than straight cuts throughout. 
3. Some shots look cut off, they do not fit in the given space or the video. 

General Comments:

1. There is a clear representation of band image and this is shown throughout the whole video.
2. The video is focused on their target audience and matches too their requirements (fun adn family orientated). 
3. Add some different effects or transitions for excitement. Most shots are just pure and do not have an additions.

General Grade:

• Level 4 is a general mark given by a lot o our audience, and support the grade ranging from 30-35.